9: The Story of 14- pt 1 pg 37

9: The Story of 14- pt 1 pg 37 by ~VampiricYoshi on deviantART

Page 37: Mental

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Dialogue:
*None for the first few panels*
14: I've made my choice.
I am going out into the Emptiness...
And I am going to find 2.
If you think it's okay to let people die...
then you're MENTAL!
*And then... she has an inward vision of smashing 1 over the head with a mallet.*
DramaFX: Twitch
SFX: Shove!
Clack
6: F-14!
SFX: Clack
Clack
Clack-
Clack-
Clack-
Clack!
6: 14, wait!
SFX: Clack
Clack
Clack
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Why did I add the panel with the mallet?

How many of you thought she really was gonna beat them up? I'm really curious -- what did you guys think she was gonna do?

I was originally gonna have her say "then you're RETARDED!" but I did not want to be ethically incorrect... so I went with "mental". I have called people mental before.

Note: Please comment on these! People fave them, but they don't say what they like about it! I want to hear from you!!!!

9 (c) Shane Acker
Art and 14 (c) me -- don't steal it please.